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Feb. 12th, 2007


Ascent

(09/02/2007 23:07 Nothing in here yet, I'll update it later. I just need a link reference)
...I TOLD you there was nothing in here. Did you not believe me?

Edit: 11/02/2008
   Okay, now there's some content. :)
   As I've bediced to update it with a "month segment" at a time, "November" has been added to the Prologue; planning on trying to get my thoughts uploaded later too. I'm rather happy with the line I ended the latest bit on, since it kind of "foreshadows" what's going to come.
   I still don't want to write the ending that has to come, though. I want to change it and make it happy.
   Still considering putting the inimitable Dr S into the "actual" story (as in, the non-prologue) as a counterpoint to Mad Maddox, but eh, that might point at me being WAAY to fangirlish. (It's plausible, at least - we know he'd managed to perfect synaptic scanning, and he knew he was dying so he'd have time to prepare by building a new body for his mind - but it's so horribly contrived I don't think I WILL use it.)

Edit: 12/02/2008
...part of "February" is now up. Starting to lead into the inevitable...
(edit: finished February. That last bit of dialogue was NOT easy. Ugh)

More later!

Comments

( 10 comments — Leave a comment )
steelwing
Feb. 10th, 2007 07:43 am (UTC)
But..you had a message inside that said you told us there was nothing in here, but that is obviously something. This comment is also something in here. :>
keaalu
Feb. 11th, 2007 02:11 pm (UTC)
Well, I can't beat that logic. ;) There'll be some ACTUAL content later, I hope. ;)
dragonheadthing
Feb. 10th, 2007 02:41 pm (UTC)
lol Ok, I clicked it as soon as the entry appeared but didn't want to be the first to say so. :) Clicking the link was just too tempting.
keaalu
Feb. 11th, 2007 02:11 pm (UTC)
Tcha, I guess I shouldn't have cutted it. ;) *will remember that for next time*
aegis_fox
Feb. 12th, 2007 07:06 am (UTC)
Hm. The prologue here is longer than the one that appears in your post... has it not all been rewritten yet, or did you just carry over a section?
keaalu
Feb. 12th, 2007 08:52 am (UTC)
I decided not to bother adding to the prologue I posted actually onto my ElJay - and the prologue itself is more of a stand-alone short story, it's nowhere near finished. It's 90% written, it's just joining all the bits up that's taking the time.
aegis_fox
Feb. 13th, 2007 06:36 am (UTC)
Right. So should we check this specific post for updates to it, or will you provide links in later ones as well? It's two or three edits already.
keaalu
Feb. 13th, 2007 12:20 pm (UTC)
Well, I decided it's redundant to keep on making new posts if I can just update this one - all I have to do is change the date and it's (well, effectively) a new post.

Mind you, I have no idea who's bothering to read it, since like with my SC one you do kinda need to know the characters' histories...
aegis_fox
Feb. 14th, 2007 02:48 am (UTC)
Yes, but the issue with that is, it never actually changes place on any of our friend's pages - sequentually, it's still in the same spot relative to everything else. So if you keep updates only here, we'll eventually lose the ability to notice.
keaalu
Feb. 14th, 2007 01:24 pm (UTC)
Well, changing the post date on my OTHER posts changes where it is on friends' lists, so... *spreads hands* I'll make do. Not like it's earth-shattering in its importance. ;P
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